My new gamebook system

[slloyd14]

Hi all!  I've come up with a new gamebook system!  Let me know what you think!  My rationale is on this blog post.  The link to the actual system is at the beginning and the end of the post.

www.lloydofgamebooks.com/2014/01/my-new-system.html

[yvoire]

Oh this is interesting, since I'm working on a system of mine, too. I'm still unsure whether it works or not, and is going to require some testing but...
Anyways, back to your system, hmmm. You know... it's just my personal opinion and of course you are free to disregard it, but the fact that it took you 13 pages in the docx to explain the whole system isn't very encouraging...

[slloyd14]

Thanks for the feedback! I have simplified the system (though it still takes 10 pages).  It is version 6. drive.google.com/folderview?id=0Bw3nCQKxLG5_MUdpU0ZXam5rYjA&usp=sharing